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Drifting through the blind,
let it watch and wither at
your invisible talents.
Only the most agile thoughts brush through you
and form your perfect disposition.

Slither around, through my cracked heart
and pry it open: a hollow fantasy
just waiting to be as free as
the winds of change that you are flowing
through me.

Be careful not to freeze me with your breath
that indents beauty on mirrors;
it disappears when my face is reflected
because it's most certainly not what should be staring back at me.
...and mirrors are blind.
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your words are too much <33 Your poems are everything I wish I could write and everything I long to be: thoughtful and true; righteously worded and written; like pages of a book, smelling fresh and openly of a different world composed of ink, ready to be made and ready to be accepted. Well, I have no idea if that made any sense to you (it hardly did to me), but in all, I think you and your writing are both amazing : )
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Blue-Gemstone Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aww thank you so much sweetie, your kind words have just made my year c: it's so nice to hear that someone appreciates my poems so intensely, it really encourages me to write more and it gives me inspiration. Although I do find it strange, because your poems are so much better than mine <33333 thanks again, and I understood every single word you said (even if you didn't yourself). <3
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your year?  Awww <33
It's true, though, you should get your works published, I know tons of people would enjoy it!!
o//o No, my poetry isn't that good. Fact is, it just keeps getting worse and worse as time passes. Your poems actually remind me of the way I used to write, the way I, unfortunately, can't find in myself anymore... :c but anyways...!
So yes, you're very welcome, dear :iconrubcheeksplz: And I'm glad you understood, I kind of lost myself there //slapped

Neko Emoji-27 (Being kawaii) [V2]  Keep up the good work~!!
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Blue-Gemstone Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Why, thank you so much! :iconsweethugplz: and funny you should say that, one of my poems is being published in August <3333

Really? I'm sure it'll come back to you one day. I feel that poetry is one of those things that you'll never forget; yet sometimes need to look deeper within yourself. I really hope your inspiration returns; after all, you are one of my idols <3333
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Really? That's great, is it out yet?? ♥ What's it called?
I'm happy for you :D

>//> Awww... I feel... unworthy, hahaha. But thanks so much, that's so nice of you to say!!  Llama Emoji-60 (Snug or Hug) [V3] 
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Blue-Gemstone Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It isn't out quite yet, and the name of it is 'Just My Luck' :)

It's true ;w; <3
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay. You'll let me know when it is, right? <3

D'awww :iconuhuhuhuplz: Thanks again
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Blue-Gemstone Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I will ;w; and you're welcome <3
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I still find myself horribly ugly when I look in the mirror. :(

Blessings
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Blue-Gemstone Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, you're not ugly at all :( and thanks <3
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