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i. when the weight of the world is on their shoulders, leave them be.
when the heaviness transfers to you,
expect their sympathy.

ii. goodnight cuddles and kisses add a nice touch
to a relationship; it is far too much
for them to ask you to listen.
too much time is wasted, you see.

iii. yes, when they are curled up crying with their blanket or duvet or whatever instead of you for warmth, you know you're doing well.
they are beginning to tell
that you only want them for your own need.

iv. endless messages flood your phone. inbox. voicemail. letterbox. they want you but you are not there.
you don't care. congratulations - you're not too attached.

v. now it's the time to find someone new
to bend-over-backwards and jump through hoops for you.
she has gone crawling to someone else for support and is trying to forget your existence.


and just how do you feel about that?
it happens far too often these days.

**Given a :iconlitrecognition: 30/4/14
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Phantomtigers Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
that ending line heh :heart: there's some people that I would like to ask that question...
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Blue-Gemstone Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Same <3 I never have to courage to do so though
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Phantomtigers Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
with some people I've been glad that I just coldly watched them leave my life. Lashing out in the moment and showing how much it really hurt would have felt like admitting defeat or something :D maybe that's just my pride though
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Blue-Gemstone Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's true c:
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, it's too true : ( I kind of just want to show this to people just for them to see how they're making others feel. And might I say, it's very well written ♥ I love how blunt and honest it is kind of like Hazel Grace from The Fault In Our Stars, if you'll mind the reference owo! Good job!! *cues epic clap*
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Blue-Gemstone Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :iconsweethugplz: I guess I just know the feeling almost too well, I found it easy to write about it. <3
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, you're welcome :iconsnugplz: And I know what you mean, sadly ♥ Sorry you have to feel that way
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Blue-Gemstone Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's ok <3 I think most people have felt it before
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist

Yes, unfortunately
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Blue-Gemstone Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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